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 The universe is so old that you might be persuaded to think it has existed forever, but it has not.
-billion years ago the universe was born. In an explosion, in one single moment, all of //time// and //matter// and //energy// was spat out.
+billion years ago the universe was born: In an explosion all of //time// and //matter// and //energy// was spat out.
-The universe mixed into a multitude of star spun galaxies, millions and millions of them each one unique in it's own way. Among the many millions of these 8 billion years after the big bang, the galaxy of the [[Milky Way Galaxy|Milky Way]] was born.
+The universe mixed into a multitude of star spun galaxies, and 8 billion years after the big bang, the galaxy of the [[Milky Way Galaxy|Milky Way]] was born.
-The [[Milky Way Galaxy|Milky Way]] was an insignificant galaxy, but after only half a Billion years, a orbiting planet of rolling iron was born. The ball of iron had a perculiar giant moon in the sky, able to protect it from the billions of tonnes of orbiting debris that constantly threatened to crash in and expunge the newborn atmosphere.
+The [[Milky Way Galaxy|Milky Way]] was an insignificant galaxy, but after only half a Billion years, as a new star was born, an orbiting planet of rolling iron was born. The ball of iron had a perculiar giant moon in the sky, able to protect it from the billions of tonnes of orbiting debris that constantly threatened to crash in and expunge the newborn atmosphere.
 The universe watched this little rusted crusted ball of molten iron was now thick with a warm cloak of gases. 1 billion years later the crust had cooled on this particular rock, and something totally new began:
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   * Life was born.
-Life. Life Life. And the pace of life quickened and after barely 0.2 Billion years ago even more complex life appeared. First life, then complex independant life, and then powerful freakishly life. What could be next the ether wondered and as if that wasn't shock enough barely a tick had happened when something happened that simply blew everything before it away.
+Life. Life and more life. The pace of life quickened and more and more complex life appeared: complex independant life. Then something happened that simply blew everything before it away.
 billion years after life started, [[Humans]] appeared
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 ====== Humans ======
-The collpase Universe is set in a possible future of the [[Humans|human race]]. The basic premise is that [[Humans|humans]] have been around for a very long time and have travelled extensively throughout the [[Milky Way Galaxy]] [[Inhabited galaxies| and beyond]] over many millenia. [[Humans|humans]] broadly conduct this growth in a cyclical manner, expanding and contracting in phases of growth. This growth always occurs according to the rules of the technological time frame available to them: in a sense the [[Technological age|technological ages]] seperate the types of expansion and contraction across [[Pattern arcs|arcs of time and repidity]]. The arcs of growth and retraction represent a pattern behaviour of for our collective species. Ultimately the [[Jéem]] govern the [[Humans|human race]] to avoid it's [[Great collapse|guaranteed destruction]].
+The collapse Universe is set in a possible future of the [[Humans|human race]]. The basic premise is that [[Humans|humans]] have been around for a very long time and have travelled extensively throughout the [[Milky Way Galaxy]] [[Inhabited galaxies| and beyond]] over many millenia. [[Humans|Humans]] broadly conduct this growth in a cyclical manner, expanding and contracting in phases of growth. This growth always occurs according to the rules of the technological time frame available to them: in a sense the [[Technological age|technological ages]] seperate the types of expansion and contraction across [[Pattern arcs|arcs of time and repidity]]. The arcs of growth and retraction represent a pattern behaviour of for our collective species. Ultimately the [[Jéem]] govern the [[Humans|human race]] to avoid it's [[Great collapse|guaranteed destruction]].
 At the right [[technological age|technological ages]], [[Humans|human]] settlement of planets and their terraforming occurs (during an arc of expansion). Afterwards retraction is usually (but not always) cyclical too, due to the inherant processes of [[Pattern arcs|the arc the expansion was in]]. Inevitably [[Humans|human]] colonies on planets become isolated and lost potentially even eventually totally seperated. Unable to support themselves technologically, [[humans|humans]] will become seperated by huge amounts of time and distance, and generations eventually revert to a more primitive [[feral humans|feral]] [[technological age|technological ages]] and then re-assert themselves slowly over millenia as a independant unique society un aware of it's ancestral origins.